Zero nine

Chapter 1

There is a profound, almost sacred silence that settles over a mountain right before a blizzard strikes. It is not an empty silence, but a heavy, expectant one, like a breath held in the lungs of the earth. I stood by the massive floor-to-ceiling windows of the Grand Hall, a mug of black coffee warming my hands, and watched the first violent flurries of snow whip across the jagged cliffs of Blackwood Peak.

My name is Eleanor. I am thirty-two years old, and for the last five years, my entire existence has been poured into the stone and timber of the building surrounding me. I bought this place when it was nothing more than a ruined, forgotten monastery from the late eighteenth century. Its roof had caved in, its halls were home to nesting ravens, and its foundation was choked with invasive ivy. But where others saw a condemned ruin, I saw a fortress. I saw a sanctuary. Most importantly, I saw a place far, far away from the people who shared my DNA.

I had named it The Obsidian Abbey, and tomorrow was its rebirth. Tomorrow morning, a fleet of helicopters was scheduled to land on the newly paved helipad down the ridge, bringing with them a consortium of angel investors, elite travel critics, and the editors of two major architectural magazines. Tomorrow was the day my five years of sleeping on air mattresses in sub-zero temperatures, of bleeding bank accounts dry, of sanding century-old oak beams until my knuckles bled, would finally pay off. The Abbey was no longer a ruin; it was a world-class boutique resort, an exclusive retreat for those who wanted to disappear into luxury.

I had built it all alone. No seed money from family. No safety net. Just me, my vision, and a relentless, burning need to prove that I was more than just the collateral damage of my family’s toxic dynamic.

For my entire adult life, I had been the backup plan. The emergency fund. Whenever my younger brother, Julian—the golden child, the perpetual victim of his own terrible decisions—failed, my parents, Arthur and Margaret, expected me to clean up the mess. If Julian wrecked a car, I was asked to “loan” him mine. If Julian’s startup went bankrupt, I was expected to co-sign his new apartment lease. When I finally realized that to them, I was not a daughter but a human safety net, I walked away. I changed my number, moved across the country, and poured my soul into the cold, forgiving stone of the Abbey.

The wind outside began to howl, a low, guttural moan that rattled the reinforced thermal glass. The National Weather Service had just upgraded the storm to a Level 5 blizzard. The mountain road, a winding, treacherous pass, would be completely impassable in less than an hour. That was fine by me. The Abbey was fully stocked, the backup generators were primed, and the isolation was part of the charm.

I took a sip of my coffee, feeling a rare, fragile sense of peace.

Then, the red strobe of the perimeter security system began to pulse silently on the main control panel by the reception desk.

My heart slammed against my ribs. I set my mug down with a sharp clatter and rushed to the monitors. The high-definition night-vision cameras cutting through the blinding snow did not show a lost hiker or a wandering elk.

It was a vehicle. A battered, rust-spotted Ford transit van had just smashed through the decorative wooden outer gate at the bottom of the private drive. It was fishtailing wildly up the steep, icy incline toward the main courtyard. One of its headlights was smashed, and the front bumper dragged against the asphalt, throwing sparks into the whiteout conditions.

Who the hell is driving up a mountain in a blizzard? I thought, my mind racing through protocols.

I keyed the radio to the security booth at the lower ridge, but only static hissed back. The storm was already interfering with the signals. I watched the screen as the van slammed to a halt in the center of the pristine cobblestone courtyard, dangerously close to the antique bronze fountain.

The driver’s side door kicked open. A man stepped out into the freezing gale. Even through the grainy green filter of the night-vision camera, I recognized the arrogant, impatient way he carried his shoulders.

It was Arthur. My father.

A second later, the passenger door opened, and my mother, Margaret, tumbled out, clutching her coat tightly around her neck. Then, the side sliding door was wrenched open, and out stumbled Julian. He didn’t look like the cocky, slick-haired entrepreneur he always pretended to be. He was hunched over, limping, and even through the camera, I could see dark stains on his light-colored jacket.

Panic, cold and sharp, pierced my chest. They hadn’t come for a surprise visit. Nobody drives a wrecked van through a Level 5 blizzard up a remote mountain for a family reunion.

They were running from something. And they had brought it right to my door.


I did not press the button to unlock the massive oak double doors. Instead, I stood in the foyer, the ambient amber lighting casting long shadows across the polished slate floor, and waited.

A moment later, heavy fists began pounding against the heavy wood.

“Eleanor! Open the damn door!” my father’s voice roared, barely audible over the screaming wind. “Eleanor, I know you’re in there! Open up!”

Every instinct honed over thirty-two years of conditioning screamed at me to obey, to turn the deadbolt, to let them in and immediately start assessing how to fix whatever catastrophe they had brought with them. But the Abbey was my sanctuary. Its walls were infused with my sweat, my tears, my independence. I took a deep breath, steeling my spine, and walked to the door.

I disengaged the manual deadbolt and pulled the heavy door open just enough to fill the frame with my body, leaving the heavy steel security chain intact.

The blast of freezing air hit me like a physical blow, carrying with it the smell of ozone, exhaust, and metallic fear.

Arthur stood on the snow-covered porch, his face red with cold and fury. Behind him, Margaret was shivering violently, her expensive cashmere coat ruined by sleet. Leaning heavily against the stone pillar of the porch was Julian. He looked terrible. His left eye was swollen shut, his lip was split, and the dark stain on his jacket was unmistakably blood. He looked like a cornered rat, his eyes darting nervously into the darkness behind them as if expecting demons to emerge from the blizzard.

“What took you so long?” Arthur barked, pushing his hand against the wood to force the door wider. The steel chain snapped taut, stopping him cold. He looked at the chain, then up at me, his expression twisting from entitlement to shock. “What is this? Take the chain off, Eleanor. We’re freezing.”

“What are you doing here?” I asked, my voice terrifyingly calm, cutting through the wind.

Margaret pushed forward, tears streaming down her face—her ultimate weapon. “Eleanor, please! Julian is hurt. We’ve been driving for fourteen hours. We had to beat the storm. Please, let us inside, my baby is freezing!”

I looked at Julian. He wouldn’t meet my eyes. He just kept clutching his side, shivering.

“This isn’t a hospital, Mom,” I said, not moving an inch. “And you didn’t drive a beat-up van through two states in a blizzard just to say hello. What did you do, Julian?”

“Eleanor, for God’s sake, open the door!” Arthur shouted, his fist hitting the doorframe. “We are your family! You do not leave your parents out in the cold. We need a place to stay.”

“You have a house,” I stated flatly. “A four-bedroom colonial in the suburbs. Go there.”

“We don’t have it anymore!” Margaret wailed, the sound piercing the howling wind. “It’s gone, Eleanor. Everything is gone.”

The words hung in the freezing air, momentarily silencing the storm in my mind.

“Gone? What do you mean, gone?” I asked, a sense of dread pooling in my stomach.

Arthur’s jaw clenched, his eyes darting away for a fraction of a second before fixing on me with aggressive defensiveness. “I sold it. Last week. I liquidated the retirement accounts, I sold the cars, I sold the house. We are broke, Eleanor. We have nothing left. We gave it all away to keep Julian breathing. Now take this damn chain off before the people who did this to him figure out where we went!”

The cold suddenly had nothing to do with the snow. The absolute terror in my father’s eyes was something I had never seen before. The golden child hadn’t just made a bad investment this time. He had crossed a line that couldn’t be uncrossed. They weren’t just looking for a place to crash; they were seeking asylum from something lethal.

And if I opened this door, the disease that was my family would infect the only pure thing I had ever created.

“Who is looking for him?” I asked, my voice dropping to a whisper.

Julian finally looked up, his one good eye wide with absolute horror. “The kind of people who don’t care about the police, El. The kind of people who will burn this place to the ground if they find out I’m here.”

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I unhooked the chain.

I didn’t do it out of love. I did it because the idea of someone tracking them to the Abbey and destroying my life’s work was a threat I had to neutralize immediately. I needed information, and I couldn’t get it while they were freezing on the porch.

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